Tuesday 27 February 2018

Lock Down

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It was a normal day playing happily on the playground. The bell rang. We all went back to our classroom and finished our math. Aimee was so hungry and everyone was playing games.

all of a sudden there was a voice on the speaker saying “this is your principle please walk back to your classroom calmly this is a lock down THIS IS NOT A DRILL”! Everyone started running all over the place.

But Aimee and Ruby were all the way up to the gate they couldn’t hear it. They saw all of the students running to their classroom. Aimee and Ruby went to there classroom “why are you lying down”? “Get down” said the teacher. Aimee and Ruby went down on the floor. Two stupid boys were making a lots of noise saying “it’s a drill”.

The teacher said “Sh”. Footsteps were coming closer and closer to the door. The door opened slowly... it was the police officer. “come on let’s get out of here”. There was five classrooms and four police officers they all had to get out in time.


Around the corner was a man with guns. “RUN” all of us ran outside to all of the parents. But the police still had to deal we the Man armed with guns. He didn’t get away that esley. He was sent to jail.

2 comments:

  1. Haka, The dialogue in your writing is used well to impress the urgency of the situation on your readers. I'm sure an event like this will never happen to us at Frankley, but it's good to know you have given this some thought.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  2. That was a great story its awesome. A bit hard to see but I liked it.xxx

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